I like it, it tells others what you're feeling (and no I'm not a psychiatrist). It's a good way to express yourself writing things down. I'm not one of the great song/poetry critics, but I do know feeling when I see it, I see everyone else looked at the lines you wrote and said something about the word crap or the grammar, but I just wanted to let you know I appreciate the emotion, the depth of feeling. God Bless You, Phalynx