In my opinion i think that, even though there are other mistakes, the biggest flaw in this rhyme, poem whatever... is that his idea of what religion is, isnt true and is very biased.
what scares me though is how easy people (me) can be misleaded by a nice rhyme or saying. even my own sister fell for it! what else do we (including me) believe about our religion that is a lie?! we always need to be careful not to believe everything a paster, or speaker, or anyone says