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(Original) Fallen Back in Love

beicountrified-buddy
16 year(s) ago

"I think I've fallen back in love; taken it up with G-d above. I've realized I've been so hypnotized by you, (by you) maybe this is a memory. I'm locked in the moment and your eyes are still wild blue. I think I've fallen back in love, with you. (With you, with you) With you." This is just a part of a song that I'm writing, I just now came up with it; so I hope you like it!

beicountrified-buddy
16 year(s) ago

Ok, I'm just wondering... does anyone like it????

beicountrified-buddy
16 year(s) ago

Thank-you for your crude, honest opinions. :blush: :( :unsure: PS: Falling out of love is possible, and this song just notes that anytime you can fall back in.

THeMadHatter
16 year(s) ago

I like it personally. I think it's written well, and that's what counts for me in poetry and songs. :) huzzah art.

THeMadHatter
16 year(s) ago

Oh, come on guys. it's art. :P We could tech-ni-fy everything like it but that would destroy the point. Lewis Carrol's "Jabberwoky" wasn't technically done by everyone's views, so why should any other poem or art form?

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