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Does anyone think this is good?

sonicroxie
17 year(s) ago

My poem. I know it sucks, but oh well... I’m a bird trapped in a cage I’m a dog locked inside a house. I’m a zoo animal kept behind bars. I want to be free. My house is my prison cell, My room is my torture chamber I’m alone With my insanity. I cry out But no one hears me I scream But no one is here to save me I’m a tormented soul Trapped with this agonizing pain My misery will never end The loneliness will always stay And the freedom I disserve… Will never come. Does anyone like it?

ANGEL-FROG95
17 year(s) ago

i like it....its really good...when did u write it....id it the first poem u have written...or is it kinda like a hobbie or somehting

sonicroxie
17 year(s) ago

[b]ANGEL-FROG95 wrote:[/b] [quote]i like it....its really good...when did u write it....id it the first poem u have written...or is it kinda like a hobbie or somehting[/quote] My English teacher says that I have a talent for poetry, so I'm trying to get more into writing poems and stuff. It's kinda cool, because I'm now writing poems that go with pictures that I draw. I don't know though, because I don't think I'm that great at it.

kenzielou2
17 year(s) ago

it is a great poem but my only problem is..... do you really feel that way i mean all alone and everything :huh: don't get me wrong tho i really really liked it :D

sonicroxie
17 year(s) ago

[b]kenzielou2 wrote:[/b] [quote]it is a great poem but my only problem is..... do you really feel that way i mean all alone and everything :huh: don't get me wrong tho i really really liked it :D[/quote] Yeah, I do feel like that.

Twig401
17 year(s) ago

it is really good =] keep writing that type of stuff. its awesome. :)

im-for-him
17 year(s) ago

I love it! You do have a talent for poetry.

sonicroxie
17 year(s) ago

[b]im_for_him wrote:[/b] [quote]I love it! You do have a talent for poetry.[/quote] Thanks. :)

ANGEL-FROG95
17 year(s) ago

no fense to u but y arent u a christian anymore

MaLiBuBaby
17 year(s) ago

thats deep

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