I wrote this...Im not a good writer...It was done in a minitue....Feedback please... Verse 1:I've had my time on top I've had my moments but I forgot I've seen some things that make me cry I've heard some sounds that make me wanna die Chorus: But you take it all away You make me new everyday In your shadow I will stay Oh God Oh God, Im a new man everyday Verse 2:Youve had your doubts, & the pain hurts I know Youve had some times, where you just wanna go home Oh God, why cant they see?That you can fix everything? Chorus: you take it all away You make me new everyday In your shadow I will stay Oh God Oh God, Im a new man everyday Bridge: And everyday I'm renewed,everyday Im brand new everyday I'm renewed,everyday Im brand new, and its all cause of you Chorus:you take it all away You make me new everyday In your shadow I will stay Oh God Oh God, Im a new man everyday

Awesome song! I think your a great writer and the song was very well written!

Well, thank you both very much!:) :) :)

I liked the song...it was cool and I think you are a god writer...good job

Thanks...that means alot.

Very good lyrics!!!!!! strong message. you are a very good writer and should keep writing and post more you have a talent. If it's a way to to express feelings you do it well.

Well, thank you maam. I appreciate that.:) :) :)