Please tell me what you think of this. It's a song I wrote. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ [u]Verse 1[/u] He slips into class Teacher asks, "Why?" He shrugs his shoulders And takes his seat The weight of their stares Tells him that he Should just stay silent (Chorus 1) [u]Chorus 1[/u] If you only knew If you only knew If you only knew What kind of pain I've gone through [u]Verse 2[/u] She comes home cryin' Says, "Mom, I can't go on." Mom turns and says, "Yes you can. Keep holdin' on." She goes to her room She asks, "Why?" She prays (Chorus 1 x2) [u]Verse 3[/u] Broken and bruised He hangs on a cross He cries, "Father, why?" His body, a holy sacrifice And when we ask, "Why?" He answers (Chorus 2) [u]Chorus 2[/u] I know I know I know What kind of pain You've gone through I died so you may live I love you More than you'll ever know Know what kind of pain I've gone through 'Cause I love you --------------------------- What do you think? [b][u]PS- Please don't copy this. It's a song that I wrote and I would greatly appreciate it if no one copied this as their own work. Thank you.[/b][/u] God Bless, Psalm84_10 Post edited by: Psalm84_10, at: 2007/07/17 17:57

Post edited by: Psalm84_10, at: 2007/07/17 17:57

interesting...but personally I wouldn't post anything on the web that isn't copyrighted. it could be stolen but I'm pretty sure you already new that, right? B)

I edited my post Stacticstellarhawk. What do you think? Should I change it?