the tears hit the floor as i think of your face and i know in my heart it's time to turn the page sometimes i wish i never knew you maybe it wouldn't hurt so much it feels the ones who'll kill me are the ones i love and trust i gave you my hand i gave you my heart but you chose to walk away and you tore me apart so i guess goddbye is all i have to say to you i can't handle any more pain that you coo cruelly choose to put me through i never thouht we'd be aprt i thought we'd be together to the end but the day you chose to walk away is the day i lost my best friend okay you guys tell me what you think of this. it was just something i was feeling and i wrote it in like three minutes. don'y be afraid to criticize, it will really help. so give me your honest opinions.

i love this poem! two thumbs up! do write a lot of poetry?

It's really good! I like it.

[b]sonicroxie wrote:[/b] [quote]It's really good! I like it.[/quote] that is exactly how i feel. :laugh: ;)

u know what that peom describes every thing thst has happened 2 me in the past month my 2 bfs chose 2 walk away 4rm me cuz of a stupid fight we had but, i loved the poem

thanx, no harkee33 i don't write a lot of poetry, only when i feel like it. i wrote one about my aunt that died that i felt like she was another mother. i actually got it published in a book.

wow that is cool that you got a poem published in a book! sorry sbout your aunt:( . keep up the good work! ~harkee33~