I was wondering if anyone would want to post their christian poetry on forum. Here is mine, hold nothing back. [b]Untitled #1[/b] Something's gotten over me Lack of light, I cannot see Myself through this haze As I'm trapped in this sinful maze Well, what can I say? Something's gotten in my way I throw down my broken crown Break these wall of sin down Neverending Uncertainty Clouding over me Raining doubts As far as the eye can see Well, what can I say? Something's gotten in my way I throw down my broken crown Burn these liquid doubts down The dead are after me Angered heracy Wrath of demons at my door Fear slams me to the floor Well, what can I say? Something's gotten in my way I throw down my broken crown Smite these past horrors down ((I was really tired when I wrote this, and I've done better))

I'm not the poetry kinda guy, but thats really good. I'm not tryin to be mean,but I'm not smart...whats the broken crown?:S

I may be wrong but this is what it means to me. When he refers to throwing down his broken crown he's saying that throwing away what he's messed up so to speak. At least that's what I got from the poem. Which was very well written by the way. I can definitely tell that you were a little tired though. Some of the lines don't make sense togeher. Other then that I thought it was pretty good.

That's awesome way ta go!! im kinda new to My Praize so ne one who wants a new buddy here i am!!!! :P *Sarah*

by broken crown I mean't useless pride. I have been having trouble keeping my poetry completely understandable lately. XP Thank you for the kind words on my poem.