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Would you read this??

HelloWorld
18 year(s) ago

http://www.mypraize.com/index.php?option=com_content&task=view&id=63320 Hey, wanted some opionions. Would any of you guys care to read something like this story?? It's my first draft, and a little rough (I'm going back and re-writing), but what do you guys think of the story line thus far?? Again, I know it's rough, but I would really appreciate input!! Thanks!!! :cheer:

HelloWorld
18 year(s) ago

-bump- C'mon, guys!! No one has any opinions???

Bittersweet
18 year(s) ago

I really like it. Very good detail, and an excellent plot so far. I like this Matthew character, and I would like to see more

HelloWorld
18 year(s) ago

Thanks, bittersweet!!! I'll post more as I go along. I really appreciate the input!!! :) :)

Bittersweet
18 year(s) ago

[b]HelloWorld wrote:[/b] [quote]Thanks, bittersweet!!! I'll post more as I go along. I really appreciate the input!!! :) :)[/quote] You're welcome. :)

GamingGal
18 year(s) ago

i didnt read it all but i like the details and the plot. im writing a story too but i focus on the people more than the details. im now wonderin if that is bad...:S

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